Landing on the moon poem
Landing on the moon is scary
Because you know you might meet a fairy
The moon is as white as snow
And it is the biggest thing at night that does glow
Tuesday, December 17, 2019
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Hi again Marcus!
ReplyDeleteGreat Poem! It can be tricky creating a poem that makes sense and rhymes as well, but you have done it perfectly.
Great use of pictures and colours as well, the different coloured lines make your poem really pop!
I especially like the line you wrote: "The moon is as white as snow. And it is the biggest thing at night that does glow" That's really clever language!
Are you interested in the moon? Do you know interesting facts about space?
Bye for now,
Gabe
you too can make a poem about the moon
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