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Tuesday, December 24, 2019

week 2, day 2; in a cell

In a cell:
Thursday 12th December 1970:

Dear diary,
I'm still in prison! brrr.. It is cold because there’s no heaters and no warm clothing. I am
lonely because there’s no one around to play with. My cell is small because prison cells are small.
I am sad because I can’t go anywhere.
I hope my releasing day will come soon!



3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Marcus.

    Great work on doing another Summer Learning Journey activity. Keep those points coming in.

    It would be pretty awful going to prison however Nelson Mandela achieved some amazing things when he was released. What did you learn about Nelson Mandela from this post?

    Make sure you read the activity question thoroughly to ensure you gain your full points. Go back and have re-read of the above activity to make sure you have completed it properly. I will pop back and check in to see how you went.

    Until next time happy blogging :)
    Emma

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  2. Hi Emma,
    Marcus has now turned his response to this activity into a diary format.
    Thanks for your comments/feedback.

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    1. Hey Marcus,

      Mikey here. I work with Emma on the Summer Learning Journey programme. I just wanted to say thank you for reading Emma's comment and making the changes to your post. We'll be able to award you the full number of points now. :)

      Have a wonderful afternoon and keep up the great work! :)

      Mā te wā,

      Mikey

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